poem

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Walking small and lost along that long, dark path
A woman stopped with a smile, and
addressed me as she passed
She said, "I've been wandering here for quite
some time now.
I still keep searching, but it seems I've
forgotten how.
It seems I didn't listen, or
at least that's what they say
What's wrong with living?"
She smiled and walked away
As I turned to continue,
I saw a man walking my direction
He opened his mouth and spoke with
such power and conviction
He said,"Why don't you go out,
and bring home the prize?
What's the use of nothing with
a little personal pride?
Can't you see it's cut throat, so
jump into the swirl!
Welcome to life.
Welcome to the real world."
I didn't know what to say,
and my uncertainty made him smile
I walked away alone and confused
I'd rather be lost for just a little while
A woman stopped with a smile, and
addressed me as she passed
She said, "I've been wandering here for quite
some time now.
I still keep searching, but it seems I've
forgotten how.
It seems I didn't listen, or
at least that's what they say
What's wrong with living?"
She smiled and walked away
As I turned to continue,
I saw a man walking my direction
He opened his mouth and spoke with
such power and conviction
He said,"Why don't you go out,
and bring home the prize?
What's the use of nothing with
a little personal pride?
Can't you see it's cut throat, so
jump into the swirl!
Welcome to life.
Welcome to the real world."
I didn't know what to say,
and my uncertainty made him smile
I walked away alone and confused
I'd rather be lost for just a little while
Become a vehicle that blossoms truth and freedom
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Comments
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to me it's a perfect depiction of my outlook on my life.I liked it alot.0
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your focus is amazingconvicted0
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that was relly cool.There have been shows where maybe the whole first half of the show my eyes have been closed. and then you'll look out in the crowd and there'll be somebody totally lost in their head, in exactly the same place you're in. That, to me, is the essence of music
~Jeff Ament0 -
Thank you for taking the time to read it, and I'm glad you liked it.Become a vehicle that blossoms truth and freedom0
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2003 was a good year around here0
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