Setaside's Poetry.... if you like...
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LOL I know you all have just been slavering in your baited waiting... so here is my new one. I am, of course, kidding. Yeesh. But it's SHORT. And you all LIKE SHORT! And I realize that I promised to be over the color thing but that line there is typed in a different font on the real version and the only thing I could think of was color. Bold didn't work too well... sorry.
PARA-FLUENT/rarity
IT happens in this life that oddities do occur and that we might live, suffer
or thrive through them as humans, as people, as gods and as monsters...
a feather weight may only hold you still...
it will never hold you down or keep you imprisoned… for long.
These lives that we dare to call our own are prewritten in blood and
stone, in languages only the very young understand.
The ears are open, the sun is strong, and the song rings in the ears with
such force that the rush is akin to a sonic conch shell at dawn. The nuclear
bomb.
the seashell shatters, the wind breathes on, god walks down the beach
leaving the shoreline untouched.
why the seagulls cry after such events I'll never know but I can say this:
the vermillion sounds of their wings... I'll never forget.I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.0 -
holy sweet mother of god!i have only read the first one, but is was on the edge of my seat. There was a build up that kept building and building to a climax that never came, just a new day. loved it.i will read the next tomorow, u better at least put these in the pj book.( if it happens)
oh and read my i hope u all like it one and tell me whats wrong with it.0 -
Originally posted by Radar(Baba)O'Riley
Originally posted by setaside2
Don't you all think that smacks of arrogance? :( I don't mean it that way.
I don't interpret arrogance; I interpret a genial post host who welcomes conversations and comments from other readers.
If anything, you're guilty of loquaciousnessYou are hereby sentenced to no more than two syllables per word for six months. Court adjorned!
As with everything you've written so far, I feel like I'm gently taken to familiar places . . . which I've never been.
My favorite part, of course, is "the circle has come". . . .
Vader: The circle is now complete. When I left you I was but the learner. Now I am the master.
MASTER OF WHAT I ASK AND WHY AM I ABLE TO EDIT THIS POST YOU PISSHEAD. DM
Obi-Wan: Only a master of evil, Darth.
CRASHING OF LIGHTSABERS:D:D
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Originally posted by windedsailor
very modern...
it was like it wasn't a poem at all.
it was more like a message.
just kidding with ya seta...0 -
to help us people who have short attention spans.Originally posted by setaside2
OKAY OKAY... it took forever to get the thread posted, longer than I could wait.. here's one you may have seen before, but I like it.
ISLE/future holdings
The rain has stopped and the lightning has chased it's tail for the last time. No thunder to rattle the screens, threatening to be let in. The wind no longer shakes the trees, trembling in humility and bowing in unison to the invisible majesty that is any given storm... even nature must worship it seems. The clouds have slowed their screaming to a low moan and the sidewalks are reasserting their dull, grey, cracked exteriors as if to prove that nothing could faze them, nothing excites them, life is all so boring. The birds settle in, resigned to the chores of tomorrow. The worms resign themselves to almost certain doom come early morn and the babes sigh quietly having been shushed of their rumbling fears, the gods at play, their fates held by their own eyes still searching for something to actually see. Windchimes play their songless tune, the wind needing refinement and education for such a moody instrument so difficult to master in retrospect. Trophies no longer matter. The house is down. The dreams alight and settle on phone wires looking for a home. Water courses down a parking lot vein refreshing hidden cracks we'll never know until next season's dandelion rears its yellow mane and dons its powdered coat. Though the ribbons flutter, the angel never can tell where nor when the motion begins. Confused by the noise that surrounds he trudges homeward, the mud only slowing slightly to allow passage. Molasses is swamplike, he reminds himself. It is dark like chocolate, but it is a falsehood. A syrupy muck that makes way as if it were a moving tide in slow motion. Devious even. Sly. What was it they all got into? The door ajar, the porch light blown, the dog asleep under the rocker. Newspapers scratch the breeze, grabbing for purchase, seeking flight. The print holds down, holds back, never gives of itself, never fades. The stories hidden in between like secrets to be told in a second grade ear. The storm's passage only serves to ruffle and upset their timidity. They share their tragedy in silence, knowing that the rains can only wash away so much and that the city slumbering silent below the eastern horizon will have much to answer for. Transparent is the love, a wisp of steam, a tendril of fog... never touching for long, the fingers grasping yet weak. It basks in the accomplishments of summer and the burnt asphalt that is man's answer to the trailbreak. Sacrifice has never come so easy. There are only so many words to read in the aftermath of a storm, the books yet to be comfortable holding so many lives in the one binding philosophy of reach and affect and dreamreachhurtlovedestroy... what affectations must be reached to catch the rain? What emotive? This page turner is far beyond the skill of even the best of us to dissuade from its purpose- time has more enemies than any other- though it carries forward in gentle manner. It no longer treads with strength upon the graves of others, instead weaving its way amongst the headstones with bated breath as if superstition had finally bitten deep enough to withdraw. The grass bends only somewhat under the force of running footsteps and raising up afterward as if to witness the fleeting figure in the mist and darkness of the early hours. The docks beckon. The water calls. The gulls cry and circle their morning ritual, a life begun anew. The water has cleansed enough and their song has changed from the melancholy of well traveled and overflighted birds, to the joy shared by a chick in its first day of winged bliss. Once the sun rises reminiscence itself is but a memory, superstition a faded myth. No markings left of the barking lightning and love is once again allowed corporeal form, to whisper and wind and grace and to eyelash... the town shutters spring open as it gathers its first breath of the morning air, the dawn an oxygenated treat. And as the first of the townspeople, those who understand the day and its callings, make their way onto the cobblestone streets, a glint in the distant suggests that eternity has just winked at its own private jest; one in which, all in all, life and death are much the same. The blooming petal, the falling autumn, the daily balance... time is nothing but the measurement of what we remember. The ocean understands such laughter, the pelicans cry as fast is broken, and the new day has arrived.0 -
Originally posted by lifeisworth
don't call me daughter, not fit to, the picture kept will remind me...
IT WAS GOOD YOU SAID THAT, I AM NOT THE ONLY ONE, CHANGE THE TOPIC PLEASE.
(:
these are all amazing... the first one especially... it's like tripping and reading the dictionary with superhuman speed...
reallly....
nice (:0 -
Originally posted by actalo
For those of us with ADD... those were very beautiful yet difficult to follow.
this is all so clever.
listen. i love this and i am tired of doing it on the board.
i am going to bust!
we can delete this and i will keep going later ok?
pleeeeeesssssseee answer me all you peopole
no on eis taking to ME IT IS ALL ABOUT ME YOU GOMERS
bioluminescence
and i really don't know much about the aeoroerieaof yet?
i have to go pea now. pea pee pee0 -
especially when you say this is just a story. please god stop.
just call me or i threaten to log off.
i thought THIS WAS A STORY BUT IT IS HAPPEING TO ME IM INTOO DEEP AND ALLTHA CRAPOLA CRAYOLA.
:Originally posted by setaside2
winded, you are correct.
The entire story of future holdings is filled with doubt. I believe that the storm gives the opportunity for second chance, though i scarcely believe the town has the ability to pull itself from past habits and dark doings. However the cleansing is where it ends because it is the single most fleeting part of the entire charade. No storm cleanses completely, and purity can never be gotten by so violent an act. I don't care WHAT the Bible says.
and as for the usage of ellipses... well... LOL
I can only say that YES I love them and that I also thought their usage in this piece was totally appropriate. The ellipses is all about uncertainty, the imagination wondering "what's next?" or "what's meant by that?." But then, occasionally, very occasionally, the ellipses indicates that which is extravagantly obvious to everyone and fills the need (or lack of need) to finish a sentence.
meanwhile, I only count the use of the ellipses THRICE.
And with the human race, both exist equally, side by side. LOL and there is NOTHING truly certain about the obvious.
However, for some reason, while the story certainly has a dark undercurrent, hoeweverso it be... it leaves me with a sense of contentment. I have no idea why. And as for each sentence beginning a new poem or a new story, well, that's just the way I talk. LOL. I guess that's the only semi decent excuse I have for that one.
Thanks, guys, for reading all this stuff.0 -
Bhagavad... is everything okay? What's up?
I can't tell if I've offended you, or if you like the stuff, or if you are just a little left of center.
Why are you doing all this? I don't understand what it is you are trying to accomplish. I'm here. Talk to me. PM me, or something.
What can I do?
and if this is all sarcastic, please take it elsewhere because I really posted all of this in a well meaning manner.
setaI'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.0 -
yikes.
left of center indeed...*Rock and/or Roll!*0 -
One last new one for a bit and I'll let the thread make it's merry way for a couple days...
LOL, maybe.
I wrote this next piece as a direct response to a challenge issued by an old friend of mine asking me to write a piece specifically to torture the English classes of the future. I did so. And it's as stuffy and pretentious as it ought to be, while maintaining SOME semblance of beauty, but barely. LOL
seta
MOTHER OF PEARL/reception
And yet another earthly patron
Wears the gilded and bejeweled crown of time upon their head
The cross of which is borne upon shoulders bronzed
With glinted grace
And a passing ecstasy
She whispered lips visible
Pale and plush
“Greetings”
The clap of a shoulder
The receipt of a gift
Flare
Smoke
Chat
Farewells
Time treated as crusted limestone
A petrified wood rare and iridescent
Opalescent
A soapstone to be carved into destiny
And worn away by the touch of thousands
Into naught but the delta shores
Teeming with the twilight of the new day
Where one sees more than the smile
And holds more than the grace
Where time walks with cane and haunted expression
And the world stands in place.I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.0 -
Originally posted by setaside2
One last new one for a bit and I'll let the thread make it's merry way for a couple days...
LOL, maybe.
I wrote this next piece as a direct response to a challenge issued by an old friend of mine asking me to write a piece specifically to torture the English classes of the future. I did so. And it's as stuffy and pretentious as it ought to be, while maintaining SOME semblance of beauty, but barely. LOL
seta
MOTHER OF PEARL/reception
And yet another earthly patron
Wears the gilded and bejeweled crown of time upon their head
The cross of which is borne upon shoulders bronzed
With glinted grace
And a passing ecstasy
She whispered lips visible
Pale and plush
“Greetings”
The clap of a shoulder
The receipt of a gift
Flare
Smoke
Chat
Farewells
Time treated as crusted limestone
A petrified wood rare and iridescent
Opalescent
A soapstone to be carved into destiny
And worn away by the touch of thousands
Into naught but the delta shores
Teeming with the twilight of the new day
Where one sees more than the smile
And holds more than the grace
Where time walks with cane and haunted expression
And the world stands in place.
you are a genious...wait how do u spell genious, well i gess i am not one0 -
Originally posted by Last Exit
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hurting is felt
my neck in a belt
i couldn't help
but to remember myself.
...
lightning flashes
from my eyes blood splashes
clotting the gashes
and clouding my glasses.
Last Exit, that one's a little intense for me as that is exactly how my best friend killed herself back in high school. It is a very decent piece of PROSE, heh, and it makes me remember... Which isn't a bad thing. I was kind of hoping that she might still be watching over me from time to time.
setaI'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.0 -
seta-
Mission accomplished: it is torture
I'm jus' fuckin' witchya.
Does have a Renaissancey spicey sintax lyricism thing a-happening.
Suggestion though: maybe rework the last three lines into a rhyming triplet:
Where one sees more than the smile
And holds more than the grace.
Where time walks with haunted face.
And the world stands lonely in place.
"Time walks with cane" is too easy for me, but I like the haunted expression impression . . . sans the word "expression." That violates your court mandated two syllable judgment anyway.0 -
LOL
DAMN YOU AND YOUR PROBATIONARY TERMS. You tell the magistrate that he can take his thesaurus and go straight to the fires of hell! THE FIRES of DAMNATION I TELL YOU.
And it is even further more ironic that you should post that last verse because at one point it was like that, almost word for word, but it was decided that it would be tougher for the English student to figure out WHY I broke the iambic movement. Why did I decide to blow the tempo? Can you see it? The horror. And the english professor telling them exactly why I did it, when even THEY don't have a friggin' clue.LOVE it.
Oh and it's not like I don't like this piece, I do. I like it a great deal, I think it has presence. There is an accompanying piece written about English Professors and their terrorist tactics that I'll post in here once I get it typed up. It's a powerhouse piece of multi-syllabic montage that will most certainly get me banned from this forum, if I haven't been already.
seta
ps fuck with me again, and I'll even revoke your CREED privileges, you'll be stuck listening to CHUMBAWUMBA for the remainder of your sentence. And that, my friend, is madness I tell you. Madness.I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.0 -
this thread is more entertaining to me than the entire board, i shit you guys not. thanks for all of it!
p.s.you are a genious...wait how do u spell genious, well i gess i am not one
it's genius*Rock and/or Roll!*0 -
Last Exit:
No dredging up or shit-assing here... It is necessary, to be human.
And it is fun. No doubt. I like it a great deal that people read my stuff and hopefully come away with something different. It means a lot to me that the stuff I write affects people. Everytime I post here I am essentially asking... do you like my thoughts? do you like my dreams? what do you think about your thoughts? where are your dreams? amongst other things. It all SOUNDS cheesy, I know, but introspection and philosophy were the building blocks of many a great creation, and they certainly contrived to inspire some of the greatest acheivements in mankind's history. Otherwise, growth remains in all directions and even if I've affected someone negatively, i.e. they fucking HATE it, it still affected them, whether they like it or not.
I used to spend a lot of time working on my environmental awareness. I took a lot of pride in knowing that if I was walking down a sidewalk and someone stepped aside for me, that I had changed their day, in a subtle manner to be sure, but that is the case. And the realization that I was aware of them as a human being and how I was caused to ponder them and their lives as I continued into the city, certainly changed me. I am continuously fascinated by the little things in human daily events.
I guess that's that. LOL there I go again.
setaI'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.0 -
In irony we shall taste the bitter rustblood of life's defiance of our needs in favor of our wants.
NEW PRAYER/for the honor of pennyroyal tea
bring it down… the house surround...
angels wings the flight around
acoustic tile the heart so loud
the love the push the cry the crowd
debris, the slats of picketfence,
the cyclone shudders, cowed
the arms of greatness -the cry of the babe-
the king’s plush carpet begins to fade,
a myth:
make the ethereal way, make your ethereal way
the song is your term
spring explodes and autumn slides by
winter undermines, its own melting tide
the love the push the cry the crowd
the hands, the ground.
dirt the scent, the rose, the sound…
what the sensual takes the tactile will give
the sigh itself will find a way to live
again
the cry the love the push of the crowd
why, the guilty are bled and intensely bound
the rose in bloom
they arose, in bloom, now,
the sigh in the ear
the circle has come
and the life is found.I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.0 -
thank you sir or madam0
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However, gendrifically speaking, I believe sir would be most appropriate. Unless you aren't speaking to ME
in which case you may call me whatever you wish.
Marc works for most people, and I do tend to answer to it. Mostly.
I hope that you liked it. and I can't thank you ENOUGH for reading it. Sincerely.
oh.. and you're welcome. I hope. I hope.I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.0
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