yours always

kdpjam
kdpjam Posts: 2,303
edited August 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
you're my bright and shining star
a brilliant beacon of light
so very close, yet far away
my ship on the waves at night
and my sunshine all of the day

a musical symphony
a perfect note in a song
my melody, my harmony
my crutch to help me get along

in the winter you're my fire glow
a sparkling jewel in a diamond show
my tour de force, my everything
a flourishing flower in the spring
how much i love you-
you already know
lay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
~it is shining it is shining~
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  • Holey Ghost
    Holey Ghost Posts: 744
    that's very sweet kdjam! and a nice flowing rhythm :)
    Create Good Things........
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  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    I love this one. :)
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  • Jamal
    Jamal Posts: 2,115
    Great read after a day of studying, thanx :)
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

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  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    kdpjam wrote:
    you're my bright and shining star
    a brilliant beacon of light
    so very close, yet far away
    my ship on the waves at night
    and my sunshine all of the day

    a musical symphony
    a perfect note in a song
    my melody, my harmony
    my crutch to help me get along

    in the winter you're my fire glow
    a sparkling jewel in a diamond show
    my tour de force, my everything
    a flourishing flower in the spring
    how much i love you-
    you already know

    So is that sweet ode written for Puffer?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • kdpjam
    kdpjam Posts: 2,303
    karma defect wrote:
    So is that sweet ode written for Puffer?

    no
    lay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
    ~it is shining it is shining~
  • kdpjam
    kdpjam Posts: 2,303
    this is actually about people and friends of mine, some living now, and some living through me after they are gone from this world... who inspire me.
    lay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
    ~it is shining it is shining~
  • chiquimonkey
    chiquimonkey Posts: 9,337
    very beautiful!
  • kdpjam
    kdpjam Posts: 2,303
    chiquimonkey wrote:
    very beautiful!

    thank you chiqui. you are a sparkling diamond yourself.. ;)
    lay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
    ~it is shining it is shining~
  • chiquimonkey
    chiquimonkey Posts: 9,337
    aw thanks! i feel more like a burnt piece of coal this morning....i'm so sleepy lol

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