Lyrics to new song, "Dawning Lullaby"
                
                    FinsburyParkCarrots                
                
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Storms will sunder castles broad, kings will falter in their pride,
all will beg along the road that greed has cut through mountains wide.
The only crown there is to wear, come the days of cold and rain,
is what you shape of love and care, a fragile lovegold daisy chain.
Fathers toy with stolen ground their sons and daughters will devour.
Wind will beat their brows, around their lonely deathward hour.
How they’ll blame the sun and stars, for the follies of their lives,
though the earth is cut with scars, from their walls of sticks and knives.
Hush now, darling, don’t you cry,
dream new light beyond your eye.
II
There‘s a field, no columbine will grow for man’s ingratitude.
There’s a field, no fennel fine meets man’s devices, cheap and crude.
There’s a field beyond the night, only carefree lovers find,
making one in aimless flight, finding God in gainless mind.
Here’s a wood the starling knows, where the goldcrest flocks a-plenty.
Here’s a sky the barn owl sews a life of cycles, ten-a-twenty.
Here’s a sound beyond the night, only gentle lovers know,
Making song in dawning light, by the gilded river flow.
Hush now, darling, don’t you cry,
dream new light beyond your eye.
III
Drifting willows trail the stream, yellow dawn rays start to blaze.
Sleeping meadow vales in dream, near their golden dazing phase.
Maying lovers love again, rolling open gowns of green,
lying where old souls have lain, at loving’s lifting of the screen.
Lips that kiss and eyes that glaze, move the rhythms of the wind.
Blood that glows in gentle face, mirrors sun like river kind.
Hands that reach to touch this light, are lighted dust of scattered sun.
Souls will twine before the night of ancient summer stars is done.
Hush now, darling, don’t you cry,
Dream new light beyond your eye.
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I've recorded the music, only wrote the lyrics today and have yet to record the vocals to the backing. I'll say, when I've done a take and it's up, on the usual spot.
                Storms will sunder castles broad, kings will falter in their pride,
all will beg along the road that greed has cut through mountains wide.
The only crown there is to wear, come the days of cold and rain,
is what you shape of love and care, a fragile lovegold daisy chain.
Fathers toy with stolen ground their sons and daughters will devour.
Wind will beat their brows, around their lonely deathward hour.
How they’ll blame the sun and stars, for the follies of their lives,
though the earth is cut with scars, from their walls of sticks and knives.
Hush now, darling, don’t you cry,
dream new light beyond your eye.
II
There‘s a field, no columbine will grow for man’s ingratitude.
There’s a field, no fennel fine meets man’s devices, cheap and crude.
There’s a field beyond the night, only carefree lovers find,
making one in aimless flight, finding God in gainless mind.
Here’s a wood the starling knows, where the goldcrest flocks a-plenty.
Here’s a sky the barn owl sews a life of cycles, ten-a-twenty.
Here’s a sound beyond the night, only gentle lovers know,
Making song in dawning light, by the gilded river flow.
Hush now, darling, don’t you cry,
dream new light beyond your eye.
III
Drifting willows trail the stream, yellow dawn rays start to blaze.
Sleeping meadow vales in dream, near their golden dazing phase.
Maying lovers love again, rolling open gowns of green,
lying where old souls have lain, at loving’s lifting of the screen.
Lips that kiss and eyes that glaze, move the rhythms of the wind.
Blood that glows in gentle face, mirrors sun like river kind.
Hands that reach to touch this light, are lighted dust of scattered sun.
Souls will twine before the night of ancient summer stars is done.
Hush now, darling, don’t you cry,
Dream new light beyond your eye.
___
I've recorded the music, only wrote the lyrics today and have yet to record the vocals to the backing. I'll say, when I've done a take and it's up, on the usual spot.
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            Haha, being picky about editing the last sentence. I meant:
 I've recorded the music, only written the lyrics today and have yet to record the vocals to the backing. I'll say, when I've done a take and it's up, on the usual spot.
 See, even in long
 fancy sentences
 you have to keep struing
 all the verb tenses. 0 0
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            very nice is an understatement, fins!lay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
 ~it is shining it is shining~0
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            I'm tempted to put the instrumental version up, now.
 By the way, I'm worried about Blue "The Stealth Doggie", dyaogirl's 12 year old Italian Greyhound. He was in Pearl Jam's top 8 friends on myspace, for a while. He's not well. I've chatted with him on Skype, every day since 2003. He knows my voice, knows my face, and just thinks it weird he can't smell me! 
 Poor fella, he's getting on. Cyberlove is love, and if you can send it to a doggie, please do.0
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            Yay, a new song. &&&&&&&&&&&&&&0 &&&&&&&&&&&&&&0
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            great song FPC! 0 0
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            Thanks! 0 0
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            FinsburyParkCarrots wrote:I'm tempted to put the instrumental version up, now.
 By the way, I'm worried about Blue "The Stealth Doggie", dyaogirl's 12 year old Italian Greyhound. He was in Pearl Jam's top 8 friends on myspace, for a while. He's not well. I've chatted with him on Skype, every day since 2003. He knows my voice, knows my face, and just thinks it weird he can't smell me! 
 Poor fella, he's getting on. Cyberlove is love, and if you can send it to a doggie, please do.
 much love to blue, the stealth an' to dyao0
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            Thanks, Pasta. He's feeling better now, but he was rough for a couple of days.
 A draft of the song is up on the demos page, now:
 http://www.myspace.com/finsburydemos
 I'll probably redo the vocals, and see to that occasional, high pitched D. But it's a draft, for now!0
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            And here's a warts and all instrumental runthrough of some of the chords for it. Once I know the piece well enough, it'll flow a lot better. But Rome wasn't built in a da
 y. 
 Oh, nearly forgot:
 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L_uJwu_em6I
 The tuning is DADGAD, by the way.0
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            Sounds good. &&&&&&&&&&&&&&0 &&&&&&&&&&&&&&0
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            beautifully melodic ~ can't wait to hear it set to music!!!If I had known then...what I know now...
 the vic ~ 8.2.07
 eV at The Ryman ~ 6.18.09
 st. louis ~ 5.4.10
 If we all did a little, together we could make a BIG difference....wanna help us?
 Then visit http://wishlistfoundation.fancorps.com0
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            I like the line "Dream new light beyond your eye."Live the life you dream
 "Cause I can't wait to figure out what's wrong with me
 So I can say this is the way I use to be" -- John Mayer0
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            Thanks. I think that line is the key to the whole thing, really. 0 0
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            The image of light carries more power, then using "life" or something like that. Most of the song is filled with life moments, "Light" is a unique counter to that idea of our existence.Live the life you dream
 "Cause I can't wait to figure out what's wrong with me
 So I can say this is the way I use to be" -- John Mayer0
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            I'm seeing this on an epic film soundtrack. The demo musically has got a great feel to it and the "bigger than life" lyrics stand alone easily. Very beautiful. By the way do you ever listen to Richard Thompson? He is one of my longtime favs and you remind me of him "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to eachother." Mother Theresa0 "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to eachother." Mother Theresa0
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            I do know him. I think the world of John Martyn, though.
 Here's me trying to read my pc screen without glasses, and play/sing the song. Understandably, I wasn't hitting the notes as I should - the dogs were howlin' like fook outside - but who cares. Ya get the idea of how it might sound, when I warm it up a bit. 
 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bKql0HAFvko0
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            If only England was as English as this 
 Good stuff, Richard.
 Good stuff to come home to in the dead of night.0
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            I'm Irish. 
 Oh, by the way, I see John Smith on your blog.
 Top man, he is! We've exchanged the odd word here and there, you know. 0 0
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            FinsburyParkCarrots wrote:I'm Irish. 
 getouttahere! Sorry to tar you with that brush then, I guess FinsburyParkCarrots wrote:We've exchanged the odd word here and there FinsburyParkCarrots wrote:We've exchanged the odd word here and there
 Cool! What was the occasion?
 I STILL haven't bought his album, ashamed to say. Am meaning to see one of his london shows though - either the 14th or 15th - so I'll have to buy it then. Shame I won't get to see John Martyn on the same ticket...0
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