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  • the wordsmith chooses the elements of his art so as to allow the reader to believe he or she is special in their ability to understand

    no... not so as to allow

    well, maybe... in a way...




    ...bred crumbs...
    ...gathering stone to the surface...

    oh, and so many more...

    these words are wonderful, seta
    beautiful in resignation to be nothing but the king
    so much in that...


    you wrote them all at the pc?
    ~all is full of love~
  • setaside2
    setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    all of the previous 4 have been written on the pc, in fact.

    it is not natural for me and yet it works so well. I write completely differently when I type... and while both styles are decent, I like the typed one better. I don't know why.

    This one is a love poem of sorts... or a poem of fantasy, which may or may not be the same thing.

    I do so love his fortress within his cottage.

    thanks for taking the time to read this stuff guys, I know this thread is getting loooooong but I just can't start a new one. This one has all our history on it. LOL it'd be like moving to a new state.

    so it goes.
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
  • "The king of all flights fancy" really hit me. thanks for that.
    There have been shows where maybe the whole first half of the show my eyes have been closed. and then you'll look out in the crowd and there'll be somebody totally lost in their head, in exactly the same place you're in. That, to me, is the essence of music

    ~Jeff Ament
  • keyboard poetry just comes off so much faster...
    kind of eliminates the middleman paper and pen can sometimes be

    and the penmanship! :)

    i see a difference between these new ones and the paper ones...

    don't give up on paper, please... i like those, too :)
    ~all is full of love~
  • setaside2
    setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    Originally posted by setaside2
    The King of All Flights Fancy


    do not curtsy nor bow before the king,
    there is no necessity.
    A payment of respect requires merely the nod of recognition from across the room,
    a wayward wink that carries with it the secrets of all the world,
    the voices that whisper in the wake of those who travel past,
    the election of supremacy more an invite to the ballroom,
    the glory a ghost of seasons gone,
    the youth and effervescence a mocking gift to lay at the feet of those who worship you...

    Did you fancy that pink bow as she walked by, I thought to myself...

    it was garish and crass though the flavor seemed keen in the 2:00 sun,
    these shadows ever longer as the autumn descends.
    I envision her turning the corner though I have resumed my journey opposite.
    Strange how the world allows the wings to carry home so many a persona,
    those whispers heard are the bees taking flight to their latest hive.
    Must the cave shadow so dark as the moon fades behind the regional lake and dancing district?
    Why must the sonic wave of evening sonar turned wrecking ball devour me so?
    those sand castles at your knee our microcosm,
    crumbling to dust as they are lapped by the tide,
    the useless pride involved in construct misconstrued and proven wrong.

    Tiptoe the tide in temerity,
    the time a tawny streak of tingle and twine,
    you rush to meet the wave, bred crumbs in the wake,
    your aftereffects my shockwave north.

    I noticed my petals are wilted as though the weight of the salt in this breeze were the world upon the tip of a tongue,
    the wait for the world to turn the flick of an eyelash on the air.
    Why the metaphor must fail for free and direct speech when the art is lost is a killing thing.

    The king pads his plush and faded carpet so torn and threadbare with the years of worry for his sins.
    His bare feet feel the comfort of the necessary and familiar weave, such patterns that are woven underfoot in a day the way of the wind.
    The paraffin drips as the water-core candles are blown out,
    the late evening presumed to be enough to say farewell and good night to all.
    His footsteps fade into the black echoing a presence far gone beyond the one who shuffles by.
    The heads that turn and those comments that follow so sly...

    bring the fluttering mariposa a rose,
    she is tired and willing and may yet breach a stroke of faith so far stretched,
    the flight attained a trembling and hesitant affirmation,
    the unanswered question of landing another statistic to gain.
    Dare us all to go it together, be it alone,
    the holes in the carpet shall only grow deeper,
    gathering all that is stone nearer and nearer to the surface.

    Watch that patch of cold, his majesty considers it most grievous and begs your forgiveness as his house is not as well kept as it once was, his castle no longer the mastering fortress it used to be.
    Strange how he steps onto the sand looking back at the open cottage behind and all that comes to mind is a pink bow, crass and garish in the early afternoon...

    the autumn may bring peace come the late monsoons as the waves pound the microcosm into oblivion.
    How cruel the flood.
    How cleansing.
    The taste of salt never so bittersweet.

    The cry of seagulls settles a soul so covered in grit and thread bare, the winged creatures padding down the beach in troves. No one notices a flash of pink on the returning tide; a silent wish of good fortune and the setting sun...

    The angel has arrived.

    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
  • Have you been eating Edgar Allan Poe's brain again, seta?

    Or have you been watching too many LOTR movies?
  • setaside2
    setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    Neither, dear sir. LOL. Though I am a Poe fan (both the singer and the writer), I have not read any of his work in over a year, unfortunately. Also, while I do so love LOTR, I do try not to have any references to it in my paperwork...

    I have had a vision of the king and his threadbare carpet for months now and I cannot get it out of my head. This has helped a lot.

    I take it that it passes muster? LOL or at least passes the mustard?

    good to see you Radar, I find myself missing you these days that I am not at home and/or able to come to the screen.

    seta
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
  • where are you, seta?
    ~all is full of love~
  • setaside2
    setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    right here. miss me?
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
  • Originally posted by setaside2
    I have had a vision of the king and his threadbare carpet for months now and I cannot get it out of my head.
    Interesting.
    I've had a vision of the Chiefs screwing up their Super Bowl chances in my head for months that I cannot get out of my head. I would write a poem about it, but it would merely be a collection of invectives. Oh, hell. Why not?

    FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK
    STUPIDGODDAMMUTHERFUCKINGPIECEOFMUTHERFUCK
    FUCK FUCK FUCK
    OH SHIT OH SHIT OH SHIT
    THAT DOES IT
    THAT DOES IT
    THAT DOES IT
    FUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCK

















































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    FUCK
  • Originally posted by setaside2
    right here. miss me?

    You're always missed when you're gone, silly! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • setaside2
    setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    Originally posted by Radar(Baba)O'Riley
    Interesting.
    I've had a vision of the Chiefs screwing up their Super Bowl chances in my head for months that I cannot get out of my head. I would write a poem about it, but it would merely be a collection of invectives. Oh, hell. Why not?

    FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK
    STUPIDGODDAMMUTHERFUCKINGPIECEOFMUTHERFUCK
    FUCK FUCK FUCK
    OH SHIT OH SHIT OH SHIT
    THAT DOES IT
    THAT DOES IT
    THAT DOES IT
    FUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCk
    ps
    FUCK


    LOL I'm pretty sure that the Denver Broncos had a little something to do with that.

    It's that high altitude, you can't stop someone from high altitude in KC. All that extra oxygen and they'll kick you in the nuts.

    Sorry for the Chiefs, it wasn't in their cards anywho. You'll see the Broncos blow it in the Playoffs... if they make it to the playoffs. Just watch.

    and recall: football is truly meaningless in the cosmic way of things. I'm fortunate that I still realize that there is a team in Denver one way or the other.

    this is because while I am male, I am not a GUY. Or so I have been told.

    but that's a whole other Jerry Springer.
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
  • all in time will be fine.
    Some people have to have the sultry evenings Cocktails in the blue, red and grey But I like every minute of the day.
    INTER-FUCKING-MISSION!!!
    Newcastle-Riverside 02/22/92!!!
    E.rutherford New Jersey 01/06/06
    Athens -Greece.survived !barely-
    Wembley 18/06/07- no words- just smiles!
  • Eekers beekers, seta.
    Didn't mean to turn this into a sports thread.
    Now talk about soiling.
  • Originally posted by Radar(Baba)O'Riley
    Eekers beekers, seta.
    Didn't mean to turn this into a sports thread.
    Now talk about soiling.

    are you more in favour of a peaty or acid based soil.

    hows your water table?
    Some people have to have the sultry evenings Cocktails in the blue, red and grey But I like every minute of the day.
    INTER-FUCKING-MISSION!!!
    Newcastle-Riverside 02/22/92!!!
    E.rutherford New Jersey 01/06/06
    Athens -Greece.survived !barely-
    Wembley 18/06/07- no words- just smiles!
  • Originally posted by sultryevening
    are you more in favour of a peaty or acid based soil.

    hows your water table?
    I prefer peaty because it's made from dead tweety birds.
  • true enough
    true enough!
    Some people have to have the sultry evenings Cocktails in the blue, red and grey But I like every minute of the day.
    INTER-FUCKING-MISSION!!!
    Newcastle-Riverside 02/22/92!!!
    E.rutherford New Jersey 01/06/06
    Athens -Greece.survived !barely-
    Wembley 18/06/07- no words- just smiles!
  • Originally posted by setaside2
    right here. miss me?


    yes
    ~all is full of love~
  • setaside2
    setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    and I miss all of you.

    very much.

    things are just so crazy around here lately that I haven't been able to get on at all.

    happy new year to all of you.


    much love, and you probably all have mail...

    seta
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
  • i had this crazy dream last night, man... it was crazy...
    i dreamt i was going to a wedding in this big city i'd never been to, and i was cruising through the streets on foot with another woman i called my friend, and it started to rain, so we ducked into this second hand shop, but not without first passing this young gay man who was trying really hard not to be gay, so we three sang this fred astaire type number about coming back into the closet. so, anyway, we get to the second hand shop and we get undressed, as is the way in this place, you shop naked. so we're shopping naked and talking about the groom and how he couldn't possibly fuck his mistress during the wedding ceremony because the town was booked and he wouldn't be able to get a hotel room, and then the merchant of the second hand store told us we were welcome to take a bath if we wanted, so we looked into the bathroom to find a four-tiered bathtub that looked like a wedding cake with equal-sized layers, and each tub was overflowing into the tub below, and there were men and women in each tub thoroughly enjoying the bath, my friend and i decided not to bathe, but to be content to shop naked for something to wear to the wedding...

    g'morning folks
    felize navidad
    Nosotros nunca escuchamos la voz adentro