Pushing past the red

little_wish
little_wish England, The North Posts: 532
edited January 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Lost in the red that shaded the blue
That turned the black to white.
Cloaked in innocence, experience precedes
You saw me laid bare and reached for my truths.
Your eyes make me cry tears of concrete
The hurt you have caused is now set in stone.
I once had your heart but now carry your burden
In my red abyss, I remain unknown

I don't write all that much but I had a lot on my mind last night and that's what came out of it. Please don't be too harsh
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"The live shows? Well, that's church on Sundays"
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  • ||Release_Me||
    ||Release_Me|| Posts: 1,871
    that was upsetting. but very well written.
    "This town deserves a better class of criminal... and I'm gonna give it to them."

  • little_wish
    little_wish England, The North Posts: 532
    Hey sorry to upset ya!
    I pretty much suck at writing but thanks!
    20-04-2006 04-09-2006 05-09-2006 11-09-2006 16-09-2006 17-09-2006 18-06-2007 21-06-2007 26-06-2007 28-06-2007 17-08-2009 20-05-2010 21-05-2010

    "The live shows? Well, that's church on Sundays"

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