2 word poem... contribute if you'd like...

20_layne_xien
20_layne_xien Posts: 57
edited February 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
empty shadow
hollow shell
violent hallway
under age
lightening thunder
souding off
talking back
burning bridge
crossing over
other side
open arms
warming smile
deadly eyes
crooked grin
waves crashing
boat sinking
king overrated
underrated sin
frosted rainbow
water spin
black out
hang dry
low clouds
angry sky
tall tree
free bird
only one
never heard
dirty rug
sandy shoes
paper cut
cut through
shiny dime
stone cold
dirt clump
house sold
paper back
screen door
rusted hinge
slam shut
summer breeze
over cast
over heard
never last
shoe shine
half time
rocky mountain
park fountain
crystal gaze
paper plate
new friend
clean slate....

(i have another whole page of this but i think i'll spare you... anyways contibute if you want... two words a line...) :)
...time is never wasted when you're wasted all the time...

"breathe, breathe in the air...don't be afraid to care...leave but don't leave me...look around and choose your own ground...for long you live and high you fly...and smiles you'll give and tears you'll cry...and all you touch and all you see...is all your life will ever be..."
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  • 20_layne_xien
    20_layne_xien Posts: 57
    leaving now
    long time
    no see
    miss you
    be back
    another day
    another week
    another way

    (i got to go away again for a while but i'll be back in a while... don't do anything too important without me... :) if there's anything i miss that i should definately read pm me or something so i know... i'd hate to miss anything)

    ~20
    ...time is never wasted when you're wasted all the time...

    "breathe, breathe in the air...don't be afraid to care...leave but don't leave me...look around and choose your own ground...for long you live and high you fly...and smiles you'll give and tears you'll cry...and all you touch and all you see...is all your life will ever be..."
  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    black spots
    hot burn
    cheesy popcorn
    stinky farts
    itchy ass
    smelly fingers
    red snapper
    blue jay
    wet napkin
    leaky oil
    carry me
    shit hole
    chick peas
    flavour country
    purple nurple
    candy apple
    cotton candy
    tricky dick
    tool shed
    top down
    bubble gum
    chew chew
    eat me

    see you :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • puremagic
    puremagic Posts: 1,907
    hi there
    just think
    can't now
    gotta go
    fine time
    too bad
    now late
    death awaits
    bye bye
    SIN EATERS--We take the moral excrement we find in this equation and we bury it down deep inside of us so that the rest of our case can stay pure. That is the job. We are morally indefensible and absolutely necessary.
  • EvilToasterElf
    EvilToasterElf Posts: 1,119
    ass hole
    whole ass
    Tex Mex
    Toilet Blast
    You Turn
    Sound Retreat
    Turn Around
    Drum Beat
    Bugle Call
    Rush Cavalry
    Armored Core
    Cannon Fodder
    Soldier's Call
    Dead Father
  • JDE-PJ
    JDE-PJ Posts: 721
    awaking demons
    closely follow
    decaying dreams
    shredding hopes
    lifeless host
    walking zombie
    emotions stifled
    time freezes
    moving on
    numbness subsides
    feelings thaw
    one day
    bleakness lifts
    words amiss
    no more
    I know someday you will have a beautiful Life


    Jason

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