I'm Lost In You

studio54ravemanstudio54raveman Posts: 72
edited January 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
There is no world when I am with you
Nothing else matters, time stands still
When I gaze into your eyes I see eternity
When I kiss you I feel the heat of the moment
How did we meet, I can't even remember
All that matters is we are here, together now
There is no past, nor future, only this moment
Consumed by the magic, lost in you.

As you slowly remove your dress, I am mesmerized
The perfection of your body is god's own work of art
There is no other woman as beautiful as you
No other man as lucky as I am to hold you.
Watching your tender lips drink from the warm glass of brandy
I want to kiss them and inhale your sweet breath into my soul
To taste the magic that is uniquely you
To feel the warmth when our spirits melt into one.

Whisper to me what you are thinking
No, wait, I already know from your glance
My thoughts are racing, lead on by your touch
To the ending we both know that we want
As you sit on top of me, head back, long hair flowing
I feel the fire when you put me inside you
Riding slowly, taking all of me with each thrust
Riding slowly, riding slowly, riding slowly.
BOW-WOW-WOW-YIPPIE YO YIPPIE YA
BOW WOW WOW YIPPIE YO
It's kinda hard in the L.B.C.
When you're the SNOOP DO-GG!!!

ME SAY"SHUGGY FO SHUGGY MY NOOGIE!!!!"-URBAN BOOGIE

"REMEMBER KIDS LIVING IN TOTALITARIAN COMMUNES BREEDS DISSIDENCE"- POOPY BOOGIE'S TINKY
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Comments

  • Wow!!! That brought tingles from head to toe... Man,... shivers. That was amazing.
    Put me in coach...I'm ready to
    Fuck up...the USA...
    Look at me...I can rig...
    The presidency!!!!
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,265
    The first two parts reminded me of Neruda. You could have ended the poem right there and it would have been complete. It's like you have two poems.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • ladygooddivaladygooddiva Posts: 4,169
    wow that´s sexy;) and so grrr nice one;)

    thanx:)
  • grr is right :O it was so well written. i enjoyed it very much.
    Put me in coach...I'm ready to
    Fuck up...the USA...
    Look at me...I can rig...
    The presidency!!!!
  • tHANK YOU! I DON'T HAVE WORDS TO SAY ...SO AMAZING LOVE!!!
  • isn't my man,... wow.... there aren't enough words to describe him-- the poem was magnificent though.
    Put me in coach...I'm ready to
    Fuck up...the USA...
    Look at me...I can rig...
    The presidency!!!!
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