let's go out

WalterJoeWalterJoe Posts: 13
edited December 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
hey, you gorgeous thing
i'd like to feel you on my arm
wanna keep you safe beside me
and protect you from all harm

need a man like me
with strong arms and a smile
to guide you through the night-time
ain't no use for that denial

so let's go out, honey
let's see what we can see
i want to show you off
cause you bring the best in me

let's go out, my darling
let's make it a great night
i want to have some fun
cause you make me feel so right

hey, you happy woman
that gives me shivers up my spine
when you touch me like that, honey
so happy that you're mine

so where'd you like to go
i'm going to pick you up at eight
are you hungry, are you thirsty
just tell it to me straight

so let's go out, honey
let's see what we can see
i want to show you off
cause you bring the best in me

let's go out, my darling
let's make it a great night
i want to have some fun
cause you make me feel so right

you look lovely, darling
and it's a magic night
let's go out, my honey
you're the one
that makes me feel
so right............

copyright 2004 - WalterJoe Steele
don't fuck with me
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  • WalterJoeWalterJoe Posts: 13
    when you write for purpose, it makes so much more sense instead of so much babbling and misfit words in the name of freeform.

    the purpose of this poem isn't to fucking ask a pretty girl to go out in the hopes of falling in love. it's a statement about the entire game of life. it's a statement about how you people sit on the computer day and night reading words and putting your own meaning on them. sometimes very mistakenly.

    so maybe sometimes you meet and find real friends and lovers, because you've found so much in common here, but what it all comes down to in the end is shutting this thing off and living real life. you can justify all you want that it's fun and entertaining and educational and safe. it's dangerous and harmful to the lonely and the vulnerable.

    i'm going to meet felicity tonight and i know she doesn't mind me saying so. no one should have to go through the shit she did.

    please be careful, women. protect yourselves. guys like me can't be there for all of you.

    wj

    p.s. we all know you are a coward sitting behind the screen and controlling people. grow up, you child.
    don't fuck with me
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    you're quite cynical....if I may say so....whereas.....felicity....means....happiness.....you just gave me a bad vibe......who are you accusing of what.....everyone's cynical I know.....but really.....who are you to judge people.....I don't need to be warned.....go out....then....go out.....mebbe I need to be warned.....but I'm always safe.....safer than houses......you have no idea
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • FreeWorldFreeWorld Posts: 9
    nice walter. any man can make two words rhyme. but i'm not here to judge you, as you just did so many of us. you're coming off as a typical male chauvinist, but be who you are. who am i to say? dont criticize me. I think i'll write for purpose as you say.


    walter joe.
    he's ladies luck.
    but does he know?
    he's a stupid fuck.

    Usually i'm not one to lash out at people. Simple, yet refined. Just wanted to speak, what was on my mind.
  • nailz100nailz100 Posts: 1,176
    Holy Shit....there is starting to be alot of hostility on this site. I hope you aren't judging all the men that post based on this one...I don't know what he did, but I'm really glad that I'm not him right now. Lol to all the ladies out there who speak they're mind.
    Only with our eyes closed can we truly see
  • FreeWorldFreeWorld Posts: 9
    Heh actually i'm a guy, maybe the 'male chauvinist' part through you off. owell. the hostility is gone.
  • WalterJoeWalterJoe Posts: 13
    call me whatever you want, but i'm not stupid. not all guys are like i said, just the insecure headgame players that like to fuck with vulnerable women. props to the strong women who see it coming a mile away. some are way more trusting. they get abused in the name of fantasy or fun.

    nope, i'm no chauvinist.

    isn, what do you mean "safer than houses, you have no idea"? that sounds like you can buy your protection while others can't so it sounds very threatening.

    i was speaking quite specifically at the end, my comrades. there is one person who knows it's for him.

    cynical? you're goddamn right i'm cynical. i've seen enough women getting abused in the name of love than i care to tell, men who are control freaks, pigs, substance abusers, scared of losing their money, scared of commiting to someone who will run off, tricking women into sex, afraid to say what they feel, blaming everyone but themselves for relationship crap or just disappearing into thin air.

    i want every woman to know what it is to have a healthy pair up. i want every man to do what they can to be a decent, caring guy. i can't stand phonies or con men. sorry if i pushed some buttons, but you guys who don't get defensive know you are alright.

    i don't go around being in love with love, when i'm in love it's with a person and i give all.

    yes, felicity is happiness personified.

    wj
    don't fuck with me
  • FreeWorldFreeWorld Posts: 9
    perhaps i missed something earlier. but you're starting to make more sense now. i agree with you mostly, the world is full of inconsiderate selfish individuals. but you should not have stereotyped us all into that category. just to have you know, there are girls who do the same. its not just us guys. i know i for one would never use any woman for sex or anything else for that matter. lust is not love, and i do not base it on that.
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    I think many of these words would be more pure and effective if anger didn't seep through them so often. It interrupts the message and calls attention to the writer's own grievance I think.
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  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    well... there's been much chatter about a man on the board who targets lonely fat chicks and makes 'em feel all warm and fuzzy, and gets a big kick out of it, and winds up breaking hearts...

    and there are one or two sir galahads trying to help, and that's commendable, big time

    it's one of the pitfalls of anonymous lovin'... anyone, man or woman can become easily ensnared by their own need and it's a crying shame that someone would purposefully target any one

    but it happens

    and hopefully we learn a good lesson by it, a god-given lesson we should give the "big up" for if we come out with nothing but broken hearts

    because there are worse breaks to be had

    one thing, though... kat and sea are really the only ones who can do anything worth while about it ~ god bless 'em, they do their best... but they can't keep anyone from falling in ether-love

    so... people go to the drawing board and re-invent the wheel... hopefully it rolls on to better places

    peace, y'all
  • Originally posted by PastaNazi
    well... there's been much chatter about a man on the board who targets lonely fat chicks and makes 'em feel all warm and fuzzy, and gets a big kick out of it, and winds up breaking hearts...

    and there are one or two sir galahads trying to help, and that's commendable, big time

    it's one of the pitfalls of anonymous lovin'... anyone, man or woman can become easily ensnared by their own need and it's a crying shame that someone would purposefully target any one

    but it happens

    and hopefully we learn a good lesson by it, a god-given lesson we should give the "big up" for if we come out with nothing but broken hearts

    because there are worse breaks to be had

    one thing, though... kat and sea are really the only ones who can do anything worth while about it ~ god bless 'em, they do their best... but they can't keep anyone from falling in ether-love

    so... people go to the drawing board and re-invent the wheel... hopefully it rolls on to better places

    peace, y'all

    Motion seconded. By the way, I'm not the fat-chick's lounge lizard. So that's ME eliminated from the enquiries. I like one lean athletic woman, but that's a different story ....

    :)
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    Originally posted by PastaNazi
    well... there's been much chatter about a man on the board who targets lonely fat chicks and makes 'em feel all warm and fuzzy, and gets a big kick out of it, and winds up breaking hearts...

    and there are one or two sir galahads trying to help, and that's commendable, big time

    it's one of the pitfalls of anonymous lovin'... anyone, man or woman can become easily ensnared by their own need and it's a crying shame that someone would purposefully target any one

    but it happens

    and hopefully we learn a good lesson by it, a god-given lesson we should give the "big up" for if we come out with nothing but broken hearts

    because there are worse breaks to be had

    one thing, though... kat and sea are really the only ones who can do anything worth while about it ~ god bless 'em, they do their best... but they can't keep anyone from falling in ether-love

    so... people go to the drawing board and re-invent the wheel... hopefully it rolls on to better places

    peace, y'all

    i would hope that this is not true, that no one would think that love is found in cyberspace.. sure, you can meet someone.. but love only happens after the PHYSICAL encounter.. the happenstance of the look and the feel and the electronic charge of fingertips exchanging sparktoids and orgasmic beginings.. all is thunder and 1,000,000 volts of pleasure!!!!!!
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • suedesuede Posts: 247
    i think WalterJoe and The Poet need to hang out together...
    in the meantime, i'm gonna get a bracelet that says WWWJD?:
    what would walter joe do? :D
  • suedesuede Posts: 247
    why doesn't WalterJoe just say who it is, or who he thinks it is, instead of beating around the bush? dude, if you're gonna go all out...go all out. how does he know that the chicks are lonely and fat? i want a computer like WalterJoe's! :D
    Originally posted by PastaNazi
    well... there's been much chatter about a man on the board who targets lonely fat chicks and makes 'em feel all warm and fuzzy, and gets a big kick out of it, and winds up breaking hearts...
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    Originally posted by olderman
    i would hope that this is not true, that no one would think that love is found in cyberspace.. sure, you can meet someone.. but love only happens after the PHYSICAL encounter.. the happenstance of the look and the feel and the electronic charge of fingertips exchanging sparktoids and orgasmic beginings.. all is thunder and 1,000,000 volts of pleasure!!!!!!


    hear hear! buy that olderman a beer, or a coke... or a Sobe, or something :)
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Originally posted by PastaNazi
    well... there's been much chatter about a man on the board who targets lonely fat chicks and makes 'em feel all warm and fuzzy, and gets a big kick out of it, and winds up breaking hearts...

    and there are one or two sir galahads trying to help, and that's commendable, big time

    it's one of the pitfalls of anonymous lovin'... anyone, man or woman can become easily ensnared by their own need and it's a crying shame that someone would purposefully target any one

    but it happens

    and hopefully we learn a good lesson by it, a god-given lesson we should give the "big up" for if we come out with nothing but broken hearts

    because there are worse breaks to be had

    one thing, though... kat and sea are really the only ones who can do anything worth while about it ~ god bless 'em, they do their best... but they can't keep anyone from falling in ether-love

    so... people go to the drawing board and re-invent the wheel... hopefully it rolls on to better places

    peace, y'all

    wow.

    I had no idea that this kind of thing was going on. Was there some kind of big event/mess that I missed yesterday?
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  • suedesuede Posts: 247
    dude, i'm with you...i have no idea what's going on or what this guy is talking about. i don't think you missed anything though...
    Originally posted by justam
    wow.

    I had no idea that this kind of thing was going on. Was there some kind of big event/mess that I missed yesterday?
  • EvilToasterElfEvilToasterElf Posts: 1,119
    I would be just as wary of an internet savior as I would of an internet stalker, so if I was felicity I wouldn't want to get involved with this other guy who seems less than stabile himself
  • suedesuede Posts: 247
    do you mean WalterJoe...or do you mean The Poet? ...i thought they were the same person? :D
  • EvilToasterElfEvilToasterElf Posts: 1,119
    The Poet is eccentric but seemingly harmless, the other one who knows, I'm sure we'll get some vague incantation of sorrow and lament in the next few days, and the few people in the know will comment about how sorry they are and stay strong and all that noise, well for most of us it will be a distant soap opera so I'm mostly hesitant to say anything unless something obvious was overlooked.
  • WalterJoeWalterJoe Posts: 13
    i'd tell all you beautiful women out there to not let him into your lives in any way. don't keep hoping it's eddie or jeff or stone or mike talking to you online or on the phone. look at the reality and don't get into the fantasy because you can't handle it. it's delusional.

    don't think the poetry written here is written for you in some secret way.

    by the way, i didn't find this out by being on the computer. i talked to real women who all had similar things happen to them.
    i have a private counselling service and i had one too many women coming in with the same stories.

    i've always liked pearl jam's music and the things i thought they stood for so i became quite interested in piecing together this phenomenon.

    you have no idea.
    don't fuck with me
  • EvilToasterElfEvilToasterElf Posts: 1,119
    No offence but a private counselling service seems like an aweful convenient way to take advantage of women, predators come in many masks, especially when the counsellor has used the word beautiful specifically to describe all these women he's come in contact with
  • WalterJoeWalterJoe Posts: 13
    frankly i am quite offended. you don't know what you're talking about. i care about people deeply.

    i find your use of the words "masks" and "predators" and "take advantage of" interesting. why would you use those terms, i haven't.
    don't fuck with me
  • EvilToasterElfEvilToasterElf Posts: 1,119
    Ok WJ, I'm done with this now, I shouldn't have even bothered saying anything in the first place, that tirade was all the evidence anybody needed, I don't think anyone on this board would believe for a second you are anything more than a kid who may or may not be in love with a girl, to say you counsel people is laughable unless you belong to some school organization which does so, counsellors do not write love poems to their clients, I'm sorry to the board for fueling this and ask that we lay this to rest now, it's fruitless and won't get any of this anywhere, I seccumbed to its moral ambivalence and brought myself down while doing it.
  • WalterJoeWalterJoe Posts: 13
    your response is typical of someone who is avoiding the issue. using something fictitious about me to convince others you are right is a control mechanism and so is your self-depricating by which you elicit sympathy from your audience.

    as for my poetry, who do you think it's for? you assume much too much about me and my purpose.

    i don't care if you wish to "lay this to rest". just because you are done doesn't mean everyone else should be. i have received several messages already that relate strongly to what my clients have experienced, so it has been far from fruitless.

    yours is a clear example of the type of manipulation that seems to make sense to people and change minds.
    don't fuck with me
  • suedesuede Posts: 247
    i second Evil. i'm done with this. it's a waste of time. there is nothing factual that has been presented. until someone comes out and flat out says whatever the hell is going on, i'm not buying any of it. WJ, i PM'd you to find out the scoop, and i think that's what you want. you want to feel important.....&...well, you finish it
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    completely fruitless as you have no power in this

    (unless you go by kat or sea and well... that's obviously not the case)


    everyone should lay it to rest, you included


    bye


    and stuff
  • WalterJoeWalterJoe Posts: 13
    i'll continue my research.

    bye.
    don't fuck with me
  • I love Whodunnits.

    :)
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    I think I know who the Poet is....but Walter Joe....fair go.....if that's what's going on....fair go......too bad people have nothing better to do than go screwing with other people's heads.....by the way, I think I know who the Poet is.....hehehehehehehe....he's just a little boy.....I recognise his 'style'....:D it was fun while it lasted.....

    'hi' to the lovely felicity from moi
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • i recently received a private message from someone who has found love via the internet and it has brought me back here to tie up some loose ends. i hope it all works out the way it is planned, but just to add this - the guy who i am concerned about works it like this, giving cheap gifts, making a dramatic appearance, a passionate weekend, endless phonecalls, putting off getting together again for long periods of time, then eventually either going back to an ex, saying he no longer feels the same, or that he will always love her but it's time to move on. this guy is the type who makes a person believe he's in love with them, playing everything their way, when inside he is simply playing a game of conquest. that's how he gets his thrills. it's a pure heartbreak for the women who believe this manipulator. he will never commit.

    i realize there were people who thought i was making trouble, but i have met someone here too. that night i spoke of, when i was meeting her, we saw the man who had done this to her. (he was with his girlfriend. we took many photos.) i stayed in the background and saw how he treated her for myself, staring at her and acting quite afraid. of what, i don't know.

    we do know where he lives now and so do the authorities. i simply hope he has stopped the game. meanwhile, i work with several women who are recovering from the trauma.

    i also apologize for speaking as if i know it all, of course i don't. this is one small part of what i do.

    best of the season.
    don't fuck with me
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