it's just another day

olderman
olderman Posts: 1,765
edited August 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
silent slee and the stillness
of some soulful voice
drifts like smoke
senses the thickness
of some atrophy
some sort of apathy
sadness in all those permutations
richness in glutaneous sensations
envelops my senses
in rapid rythmic momunz
feelinz of eggstacee rapping rapping til spent for you

some sort of poesy in a moment of sadness and happiness intertwined .. love you jammers
Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
As she slams the door in his drunken face
And now he stands outside
And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
And his tears fall and burn the garden green
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  • of_the_girl
    of_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by olderman
    silent slee and the stillness
    of some soulful voice
    drifts like smoke
    senses the thickness
    of some atrophy
    some sort of apathy
    sadness in all those permutations
    richness in glutaneous sensations
    envelops my senses
    in rapid rythmic momunz
    feelinz of eggstacee rapping rapping til spent for you

    some sort of poesy in a moment of sadness and happiness intertwined .. love you jammers

    some of my best stuff comes from sadness intertwined with swirls of happiness and hope.... perhaps it's because my life goes that way, eh?? which makes your stuff so lovely to read. thanks, olderman. :) you're a lovely person. :)
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

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  • HailHailVitalogy
    HailHailVitalogy Posts: 6,020
    Originally posted by of_the_girl
    some of my best stuff comes from sadness intertwined with swirls of happiness and hope.... perhaps it's because my life goes that way, eh?? which makes your stuff so lovely to read. thanks, olderman. :) you're a lovely person. :)

    same here jessie :)
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