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justamjustam Posts: 21,410
edited May 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I'm just not expressive enough
with words

Give me a cause to stand up for
my tongue is fine
Give me a person who needs help
I'm there
Give me an instrument
I make a lot of noise

But speak what's in my heart?
choke, choke, choke

So I can't say that I don't understand
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  • EvilToasterElfEvilToasterElf Posts: 1,119
    I'll be the first one to tell you that poetry is a mangled heap of clothes collecting dust in the attic of the mind. The heart is simply the person who can grab the boxes and donate them to the needy.
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    EvilToasterElf wrote:
    I'll be the first one to tell you that poetry is a mangled heap of clothes collecting dust in the attic of the mind. The heart is simply the person who can grab the boxes and donate them to the needy.

    That's a good, active thought. :)
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  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    this poem is a happy conundrum...it's existence seems to contradict it's contents...

    what I'm saying is...well done. Me likey very much!
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    grooveamatic wrote:
    this poem is a happy conundrum...it's existence seems to contradict it's contents...

    what I'm saying is...well done. Me likey very much!

    Thanks! :)
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