'Love for the Night' by Jeremys Spoken (don't boo me)

Jeremys SpokenJeremys Spoken Posts: 7,578
edited September 2012 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I have a love for the night sky, and on this chilly night, a few words came to my mind.

It's my first shot at writing how I feel........It's about the feeling I get when I look up at the night sky and I feel ultimately connected to the universe. The stars will be here way after we are gone. But we can still look up at them and enjoy them while we are here.

I don't care if this doesn't make sense, truthfully... lol



Love for the Night

The stars they are shining bright
Gazing up as im smiling ear to ear, like a bird soaring in flight
The October air moves within me
Feeling free and weightless
The twinkling is a constant reminder,
That our lives are short and the journey of light is longer
You can't outlive the light,
But it reminds us that we can live and atleast enjoy the night
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  • DinghyDogDinghyDog Posts: 587
    edited October 2012
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  • rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124

    Love for the Night

    The stars they are shining bright
    Gazing up as im smiling ear to ear, like a bird soaring in flight
    The October air moves within me
    Feeling free and weightless
    The twinkling is a constant reminder,
    That our lives are short and the journey of light is longer
    You can't outlive the light,
    But it reminds us that we can live and atleast enjoy the night

    If this is your first writing, that's pretty good :thumbup:
    That's what its all about--those words that come to you during moments of inspiration.....

    "the twinkling is a constant reminder". You should keep writing.
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    I have a love for the night sky, and on this chilly night, a few words came to my mind.

    It's my first shot at writing how I feel........It's about the feeling I get when I look up at the night sky and I feel ultimately connected to the universe. The stars will be here way after we are gone. But we can still look up at them and enjoy them while we are here.

    I don't care if this doesn't make sense, truthfully... lol



    Love for the Night

    The stars they are shining bright
    Gazing up as im smiling ear to ear, like a bird soaring in flight
    The October air moves within me
    Feeling free and weightless
    The twinkling is a constant reminder,
    That our lives are short and the journey of light is longer
    You can't outlive the light,
    But it reminds us that we can live and atleast enjoy the night
    nice I like it, I feel the night sky too, I am connected also.

    I would never boo you...
    truthfully...
    what a lovely word.
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