You're Sorry

rollings

...happiness
....sadness
.......mad I tell ya madness

break and crest the caps on your
.....big waves

seeing this as my daily habit
punishable only by itself

the elephant's.cry
the tigers.milk

and lady
alone
at night
.is
still

Cheeks

If you look sideways, your poem looks like a wave. Was that intentional? Either way I really like this piece.

rollings

Cheeks wrote:

If you look sideways, your poem looks like a wave. Was that intentional? Either way I really like this piece.

I was going for Fat Albert but yeah.... I kind of see what you mean



thank you