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You're Sorry

rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
edited May 2012 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
...happiness
....sadness
.......mad I tell ya madness

break and crest the caps on your
.....big waves

seeing this as my daily habit
punishable only by itself

the elephant's.cry
the tigers.milk

and lady
alone
at night
.is
still
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  • CheeksCheeks Posts: 151
    If you look sideways, your poem looks like a wave. Was that intentional? Either way I really like this piece.
  • rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
    Cheeks wrote:
    If you look sideways, your poem looks like a wave. Was that intentional? Either way I really like this piece.

    I was going for Fat Albert but yeah.... I kind of see what you mean



    thank you :mrgreen:
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