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I Wont Pretend To Know Why I Can't Hear Your Voice Anymore

pepperpepper Posts: 155
edited January 2012 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I found a piece of your skull
Wedged between the floorboards
Next to the bath tub

And to think
That I didn’t believe you
When you said you were broken:
That you felt
Like something was missing.

Holding,
Touching,
Seeing, that
Stained slice of bone, I
Felt such a sense of relief;

The void
The emptiness, the
Thin
Air
Consuming your being
Was
Tangible
Was
Scientific

With feet dipped in urgency
I ran through the idea
Of you being whole again.

I placed my breath with the bone
Inside
A paper cup
And asked you to drink the words
“I can fix you”

You
Stood,
Your eyes
Static spirals
Twisted corkscrews
Piercing every inch
Of
My
Paper cup filled
Pleas

“please”

Slipping the cup from my fingers
My hands
Like tulips
Became prayers
My desires
Drowned
While
Dancing down my throat
As
you
Left

To put back

The piece of skull

Right

Where you’d left it.
Pepper- I am faith without religion, without bruised knees and pleas for forgiveness...
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    rollingsrollings unknown Posts: 7,124
    holy
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    Deep93Deep93 Posts: 86
    fuckin mary me
    Toronto 9/11/2011
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    Amsterdam 6/26/2012!
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    chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    wonderful
    very much so
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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    wonderful
    Into the Wild Things
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    stargirl69stargirl69 Posts: 6,387
    absolutely beautiful, heart-aching
    “There should be a place where only the things you want to happen, happen”
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    DinghyDogDinghyDog Posts: 587
    edited October 2012
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    pepperpepper Posts: 155
    Thank you so so much for your wonderful comments!
    Pepper- I am faith without religion, without bruised knees and pleas for forgiveness...
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    Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    wow !! I feel this one in my gut, I had to read it a few times. awesome !


    Godfather.
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    PearlOfAGirlPearlOfAGirl Posts: 15,993
    Wow! I actually had to catch my breath... Thank you for sharing this poem...

    Wish you were here...

    ~RIP Dad
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    BB24919BB24919 Posts: 41
    one of the better things I have ever read on here. really well done
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