you're indescribable, hard to write about, wonderful cliché

jfs5-10-10jfs5-10-10 Posts: 326
edited January 2011 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I don't know what it is about you
That keeps me coming back.
I don't think you cast a shadow
But I know sometimes your heart is black.

Maybe its the deception,
The mystery of what is real.
But then sometimes I am the world to you
I've no heart left to steal.
Because of you.

Such a mix of hate and love,
Truth and lies.
I think I'm starting to figure it out
But suddenly I go blind.

What words can I choose
That someone else already used.
<b>Your light's reflected now,... reflected from afar...
We were but stones,... your light made us stars</b>

Buffalo 5-10-10...First PJ show..Life changing..magical..
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  • voidofmanvoidofman Posts: 4,009
    I don't think you cast a shadow
    But I know sometimes your heart is black.


    Wow! I love that line right there. The whole piece is very sorrowful and works. I'm sure just about everyone can relate to this at least one time in their life.
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    VoidOfMan wrote:
    I don't think you cast a shadow
    But I know sometimes your heart is black.


    Wow! I love that line right there. The whole piece is very sorrowful and works. I'm sure just about everyone can relate to this at least one time in their life.

    yeah
    that's the one that got to me
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    that's awesome ! and yea been there at one time or another.....God I love my wife. :lol:

    Godfather.
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