*when i count to five you'll be in a quiet place...|

jfs5-10-10

One
Two
Three
Four

Five
Close your eyes.
You're in an open field.
Under cobalt skies.
Open your mind to the things inside.
An echo from my dream.

Flight becomes your favorite game.
Above the oceans.
Feel no pain.
We're entering deeper now.

Golden light now.
Beautiful on the ebony clouds.
Feeling infinite.
Burning up inside.
Still you fly.

When you open your eyes,
Remember the infinite living dream.
Remember the feeling of bliss.
Scream.
Tell the world you're free.
Free.
Free.
Don't let your dreams become faded memory.

Godfather.

WAHOOOO that was XLNT !!

Godfather.

Pap

Godfather. wrote:

WAHOOOO that was XLNT !!

I couldn't agree more. But let me say that I have read much better poems written by jfs5-10-10 than this one. For example: http://forums.pearljam.com/viewtopic.php?f=10&t=140112. Once again

mysticweed

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