She's waterfalls & fire.

chadwick
chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
edited April 2010 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Saturday, April 10, 2010.

Waterfalls,
stones at her feet
water coming home
all I see.

She’s up touching sunrays
becoming lit up
and more light.

Her being dazzlement
the universe
incandescent
and each one
life to me.

I touch her to burn
my fingers have become her blaze.

Fire-pits ignite waterfalls
all I see
her eyes.
for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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  • DrWeiland
    DrWeiland Posts: 81
    "I touch her to burn" That's just perfect!
    "Here's a token of my openness..."
  • mysticweed
    mysticweed Posts: 3,710
    chadwick wrote:
    Saturday, April 10, 2010.



    Her being dazzlement
    the universe
    incandescent
    and each one
    life to me.


    It's all good
    but this is my favorite part
    good words, good work
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • prism
    prism Posts: 2,440
    well the date's incorrect and you seem to have forgotten quite a few details...

    do ya need the pictures to remind you?


    however...nice poem.
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
    angels share laughter
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  • pepper
    pepper Posts: 155
    A very moving poem.
    I agree with DrWeiland..."I touch her to burn" great line. Thankyou!
    Pepper- I am faith without religion, without bruised knees and pleas for forgiveness...
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    pepper wrote:
    A very moving poem.
    I agree with DrWeiland..."I touch her to burn" great line. Thankyou!
    you wanna know something hilarious?
    i told this one gal she was smokin hot and i wanted burnt.

    haha...
    idiot = me


    :mrgreen:
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • pandora
    pandora Posts: 21,855
    chadwick wrote:
    pepper wrote:
    A very moving poem.
    I agree with DrWeiland..."I touch her to burn" great line. Thankyou!
    you wanna know something hilarious?
    i told this one gal she was smokin hot and i wanted burnt.

    haha...
    idiot = me


    :mrgreen:
    betcha she still remembers that, a unique come on indeed
  • Ms. Wes C.addle
    Ms. Wes C.addle Posts: 2,559
    "Fire-pits ignite waterfalls
    all I see
    her eyes."

    Beautiful. Its so amazing how such simple words can spark our souls...
  • prism
    prism Posts: 2,440
    looked through my camera and found the date...Aug. 27, '09
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
    angels share laughter
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    prism wrote:
    looked through my camera and found the date...Aug. 27, '09
    it was nice meeting you.
    and thank you for the fun time.
    :)
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • prism
    prism Posts: 2,440
    chadwick wrote:
    prism wrote:
    looked through my camera and found the date...Aug. 27, '09
    it was nice meeting you.
    and thank you for the fun time.
    :)


    and i thank you, sir

    the waterfall was fun...as was drying our shoes by the firepit that night. ;)

    despite the rock flying off a truck to crack your windshield. and the blown tire back on that gravel road...thank goodness those kind folks :angel: from Alabama stopped w/ a tire jack to help. since we were that far outta cell range...it woulda been a loooong (20 miles or so?) walk to the ranger station...

    too bad i forgot my camera charger on that trip, or could've gotten some more great shots.

    almost forgot the day after we met that you were with me when i bought this camera, the first time you came up a couple weeks before that

    :)
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
    angels share laughter
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

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