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Along the Beach One Nite,..

trinityelizatrinityeliza Posts: 426
edited February 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Just along the beach one night
two shadows emerged in the moonlight.
Yes, they were yours and mine...
Calmness of the night we're tryin' to find!

My hands you held tight,
afterwards, placed them on your heart.
I realized then sweetheart
when at your side... don't wanna be apart!

In the solemness...our eyes met
no nights could be this great.
Then IN YOUR ARMS you held me tight
and you said "Honey, everythin' will be alright!

Then our hearts started to beat faster
As we held.... each other
I'll never feel happier
than when I'm IN YOUR ARMS forever!
Put me in coach...I'm ready to
Fuck up...the USA...
Look at me...I can rig...
The presidency!!!!
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  • blackhAwkdownblackhAwkdown Posts: 13
    i think this is also a very fine poem.
    Of a large and powerful class we might ask with confidence, 'What is the event they most desire?'..?



    Byzantine is reflected.

    I simply love what you've done with the place...
    Heavy Metal meets House and Garden.
  • DowecheatemnhowDowecheatemnhow Posts: 158
    isn't it just a purrfect piece???? i love it as well ;P
    I can hear what you're thinking,.. All your doubts & fears,... If U look in my eye,... In time you'll find,... the reason I'm here,.. In time U may come back somday,.. To live once more-- or die once more-- In time your time,... will be no more,...
    Johnny Cash (to Frank Castle/The Punisher)
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Dowecheatemnhow wrote:
    isn't it just a purrfect piece???? i love it as well ;P

    Aren't you and Trinity one and the same anyway?
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  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    the night hides a lot of things. but it also allows us to take that extra step we need. when we need it.
    and the beach at night with that fat old moon hanging there. that's a perfect night.

    this one's nice. the images that come to mind are universal but private at the same time. well done.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • DowecheatemnhowDowecheatemnhow Posts: 158
    justam wrote:
    Aren't you and Trinity one and the same anyway?

    No trinity is my best girlfriend, but a talented writer as well. I do not know why they took away the account we shared,... the notice said that they thought we were some else who had been banned in the past. We wrote to kat & sea, but no reply-- they have kicked off innocent people in geniune mistake. All there is to do is write, but if no one will look into the issue what can we do???
    I can hear what you're thinking,.. All your doubts & fears,... If U look in my eye,... In time you'll find,... the reason I'm here,.. In time U may come back somday,.. To live once more-- or die once more-- In time your time,... will be no more,...
    Johnny Cash (to Frank Castle/The Punisher)
  • DowecheatemnhowDowecheatemnhow Posts: 158
    catefrances wrote:
    the night hides a lot of things. but it also allows us to take that extra step we need. when we need it.
    and the beach at night with that fat old moon hanging there. that's a perfect night.

    this one's nice. the images that come to mind are universal but private at the same time. well done.

    I can feel your reply and what ya mean,... it's a lovely piece!!!

    I'm always horny though so I can't help that my mind goes to erotic before most would when interpreting certain songs, poems, etc!!! :p
    I can hear what you're thinking,.. All your doubts & fears,... If U look in my eye,... In time you'll find,... the reason I'm here,.. In time U may come back somday,.. To live once more-- or die once more-- In time your time,... will be no more,...
    Johnny Cash (to Frank Castle/The Punisher)
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Dowecheatemnhow wrote:
    No trinity is my best girlfriend, but a talented writer as well. I do not know why they took away the account we shared,... the notice said that they thought we were some else who had been banned in the past. We wrote to kat & sea, but no reply-- they have kicked off innocent people in geniune mistake. All there is to do is write, but if no one will look into the issue what can we do???

    I didn't mean to hurt your feelings, it's just that you two share some common characteristics...you write volumes and volumes and quite often it's sort of love/sex stuff.

    As I've said to you before, I think it's pretty impressive that you can pour so much out and it even rhymes! :D
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