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Travelling

Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
edited January 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Naked feet
Gravel
Under

WALK
Slicing
Cutting
Bleeding
Hurting
Carrying
Trudging
Shuffling
Regretting
Numbing
SLAP
Feels
Choices
Decisions
Holds
Grasps
Tries
Grips
Trips
Releases
A FORK

Left
Right
Straight ahead
Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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  • Radar(Baba)O'RileyRadar(Baba)O'Riley Posts: 947
    Edward Bloom turned right and went through the spooky part.
    He lost his hat,
    his key,
    and his shoes.

    But his heart got bigger.
  • CranMalReignCranMalReign Posts: 1,928
    RELEASES A FORK

    Left
    Right

    ~~~

    Sounds like something I'd write... about stabbing out my own eyes or something.

    Never thought I'd see a poem of yours on it's own again instead of in your megathread!
    • 98 Pgh
    • 00 Pgh
    • 03 Pgh|Philly|PSU|Camden 1+2|Hershey
    • 04 Boston 1|Reading
    • 05 Philly
    • 06 Camden 1+2|Pgh
    • 08 Camden 1+2|Hartford|Mansfield 2
    • 09 Philly 1 [EV]|Toronto|Spectrum 1-4
    • 10 Cleveland|Buffalo
    • 11 Philly [EV]|PJ20
    • 12 Philly
    • 13 London|Pgh|Buff|Philly 1+2|Balt
    • 14 Cincy|StL
    • 16 Philly 1+2|Philly 2 [TotD]
    • 18 Boston 1+2
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    I like spooky! :)




    Sometimes I tire of my megathread. Maybe I'll move this over there at a later date but for today, it stands alone.
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • CranMalReignCranMalReign Posts: 1,928
    Originally posted by Being Enlightened
    I like spooky! :)




    Sometimes I tire of my megathread. Maybe I'll move this over there at a later date but for today, it stands alone.

    Good. I prefer things outside of megathread anyway. :)
    • 98 Pgh
    • 00 Pgh
    • 03 Pgh|Philly|PSU|Camden 1+2|Hershey
    • 04 Boston 1|Reading
    • 05 Philly
    • 06 Camden 1+2|Pgh
    • 08 Camden 1+2|Hartford|Mansfield 2
    • 09 Philly 1 [EV]|Toronto|Spectrum 1-4
    • 10 Cleveland|Buffalo
    • 11 Philly [EV]|PJ20
    • 12 Philly
    • 13 London|Pgh|Buff|Philly 1+2|Balt
    • 14 Cincy|StL
    • 16 Philly 1+2|Philly 2 [TotD]
    • 18 Boston 1+2
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    God has a lot of names...


    lost and found
    leaves make
    to a sound,
    the
    rain beads
    all is trees

    god
    polar
    dogs

    sign
    bark
    overhead
    the ear
    is over
    here said,
    a signal to
    the satellite
    spaced
    radios d'
    jam

    reeds
    the seeds
    and
    Arjuna
    floated
    the
    other means
    a reality
    y"d
    ized,
    dream plane

    still in the sky
    was
    a
    silent fly
    awe
    go, a joy
    to see
    the wing'd
    see orange

    so fall tear
    you never need
    to cry again,
    a happy sea
    sent
    a blue eye
    gem'ed
    and
    whose eye is
    a given
    again

    look
    into
    you,

    ~
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    john girl! Thanks! That was very cool of you! I dig it! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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