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Mother's Day

richmonsterrichmonster Posts: 5
I offer you a one sentence poem to celebrate mothers.

Love is nature's threads
embroidered into a child's
life by a mother.

Copyright 2007 by Richard Deets, author
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    FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    I like the gentle control of the metaphor, and the subtle use of haiku, though one always has to be careful, beginning a poem with "Love is..." You never know, some old newspaper cartoonist might sue for intellectual property rights.
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    PapPap Aspra Spitia, Greece Posts: 28,262
    Happy Mother's Day!
    Athens 2006 / Milton Keynes 2014 / London 1&2 2022 / Seattle 1 2024 / Dublin 2024 / Manchester 2024 / London 2024
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