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Fester and Oblivia...

AsPrivilegedAsAWhoreAsPrivilegedAsAWhore Posts: 109
edited January 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Oblivia, Oblivia
Your hair is far from this box
Comprehension stacked and wasted on you, Oblivia.
Can't claw deep enough to hang... but mother says "Oblivia."
Cross limb sits Oblivia
Can't sigh loud enough to scatter the roaches... but mother ejaculates "Oblivia!"
Flying on the gas of the lights
Bottled women sink into pages of Oblivia.
Rounded teeth rip at faucet tips as the henchmen scream "Oblivia."
Blank stare and a wet palm, responds Oblivia
Reaching for her ear muffs she feels a tug
Fester kneels on broken stubs
With rotting hands and a broken smile
He nods to undertake Oblivia, all will be well.



Fester and Oblivia spent most time together
fools would laugh as Oblivia held the hand of such a beast
Dragging the carcass of the man she loved to the breakfast nook and past the infirmary.
Life was short but the death was long enough...
One November night Fester knelt in the street, screamed out "Oblivia."
As Oblivia skipped off into the night.
Leaving her rotting Fester dead
Hooking back, she tripped straight home.
Delayed of course for the foot games with his head.



~EL
They filled me full of drink
And led me round the rooms
Naked and cold and grinning
Until everything went black
And I came down spinning
I awoke so drunk and full of rage
That I could hardly speak
A fag in a whale bone corset
Draping his dick across my cheek
And its into the shame
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    Pearl Jam and toastPearl Jam and toast Posts: 4,475
    weird and nick cave-ish a usual. i like it a lot :)
    Come on pilgrim you know he loves you..

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    Oh my, they dropped the leash.



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    Pearl_Jam_NecklacePearl_Jam_Necklace Posts: 501
    AsPrivilegedAsAWhore wrote:
    Oblivia, Oblivia
    Your hair is far from this box
    Comprehension stacked and wasted on you, Oblivia.
    Can't claw deep enough to hang... but mother says "Oblivia."
    Cross limb sits Oblivia
    Can't sigh loud enough to scatter the roaches... but mother ejaculates "Oblivia!"
    Flying on the gas of the lights
    Bottled women sink into pages of Oblivia.
    Rounded teeth rip at faucet tips as the henchmen scream "Oblivia."
    Blank stare and a wet palm, responds Oblivia
    Reaching for her ear muffs she feels a tug
    Fester kneels on broken stubs
    With rotting hands and a broken smile
    He nods to undertake Oblivia, all will be well.



    Fester and Oblivia spent most time together
    fools would laugh as Oblivia held the hand of such a beast
    Dragging the carcass of the man she loved to the breakfast nook and past the infirmary.
    Life was short but the death was long enough...
    One November night Fester knelt in the street, screamed out "Oblivia."
    As Oblivia skipped off into the night.
    Leaving her rotting Fester dead
    Hooking back, she tripped straight home.
    Delayed of course for the foot games with his head.



    ~EL

    wow !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    AsPrivilegedAsAWhoreAsPrivilegedAsAWhore Posts: 109
    Pearl_Jam_Necklace wrote:
    wow !!!!!!!!!!!!!!



    Thank you:)



    and thank YOU Mikeh!
    They filled me full of drink
    And led me round the rooms
    Naked and cold and grinning
    Until everything went black
    And I came down spinning
    I awoke so drunk and full of rage
    That I could hardly speak
    A fag in a whale bone corset
    Draping his dick across my cheek
    And its into the shame
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    BooskBoosk Posts: 29
    Again shows the talent to paint pictures in the mind without having to settle for long bits of description ... fine job :)
    A little nonsense now and then, relished by the wisest men
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    oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    Boosk wrote:
    Again shows the talent to paint pictures in the mind without having to settle for long bits of description ... fine job :)

    AsPrivilegedAsAWhore does paint great images, however, i also get a story here which is extremely familiar.. not exactly, of course, but i have seen similiar relationships in real life..

    Excellent!
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
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    Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Definately and excellent read! and I just love the characters names!!! Very catchy! I mean, I see Fester and Oblivia and it makes me want to know what their story is! Great job! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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    imessiahimessiah Posts: 29
    i dont like the way you people talk... you fucking people
    It's a well known fact that drugs have caused paranoia, brain damage, and loss of reality in those that have never taken them.
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    mccreadyisgodmccreadyisgod Bumfuq, MT Posts: 6,395
    Sounds like a pitch for a movie to be directed by Tim Burton...

    Parables are such fun.
    ...and if you don't like it, you can suck on an egg.
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    kenny olavkenny olav Posts: 3,323
    ...festering oblivion...

    I enjoyed it.
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    rollingsrollings unknown Posts: 7,124
    kenny olav said:

    ...festering oblivion...



    I enjoyed it.

    me too :relaxed:
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