Almost Time

time2escapetime2escape Posts: 178
edited September 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
In this lost space i see your face dacing on my fall
youve had your fun some arguements youve won
ive lost them all

just remember who was right by your side
i wont forget you girl but its almost time,
almost time



- a poem i wrote
"thiers still time to escape, youve got time to escape
thiers still time so escape,,,,
auuuhhheehhh yaeeahh "
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  • dancing heee heee
    "thiers still time to escape, youve got time to escape
    thiers still time so escape,,,,
    auuuhhheehhh yaeeahh "
  • like it, i prefer shorter poems.
    'Fox hunting is barbaric, the people who do it are a bunch of snobby tories with stupid posh accents. Oh damn, i didn't say that - damn, what a giveaway...'
  • thanks man its actually a song i have recorded its pretty coo
    "thiers still time to escape, youve got time to escape
    thiers still time so escape,,,,
    auuuhhheehhh yaeeahh "
  • i like it, but was confued by "danceing on my fall" but then again im easaly confuesd
  • setaside2setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    I like the rhythm a lot.

    and...

    wow, nocode must REALLY hate my stuff. hee hee.
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
  • Originally posted by time2escape
    In this lost space i see your face dacing on my fall
    youve had your fun some arguements youve won
    ive lost them all

    just remember who was right by your side
    i wont forget you girl but its almost time,
    almost time



    - a poem i wrote

    like it i do, whoooo whoooo


    shit i am tired. headed for the spooky windy bridges
    but we are all very safe.

    im done.
  • thanks you guys

    the song sounds better he

    the dancing really bit me in the bum,,,
    "thiers still time to escape, youve got time to escape
    thiers still time so escape,,,,
    auuuhhheehhh yaeeahh "
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