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Scorned Torn Worn And Reborn.

phoebephoebe Posts: 25
edited September 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Rain feels sticky on my soul
Raining down and staying there
Rain drops blend with the tears I cry
Soon I can't tell the difference

Rain drops cool me
Sooth me
Relate to me
The sky cries as I cry

Screaming into the thunder
The thunder in my heart is louder
But no one hears it... no one knows
No one knows the hurt inside.

The day I died was the worst day of my life
I died that day
Or at least I wish I did
Feel like I did
Sometimes wish I would've

Life is tricky
Life is funny
Life is a game
and life is love

A game I lose
A game I know better than to play

Love is russian roulette

I shoot myself every time.

I die a little every time.

I die a little every time...
The greatness of a nation and its moral progress can be judged by the way its animals are treated.
-Mahatma Gandhi
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    ))))))))))ooooooxo


    everything changes

    when it stops then get worried

    that was very sad, but very good
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    phoebe-

    Excellent piece! Quiet and powerful and emotional.

    Reminds me, of course, of the theme song to M*A*S*H called "Suicide is Painless". One of the verses is:

    The game of Life is hard to play.
    Gonna lose it anyway.
    The losing card I'll someday lay.
    So this is all I have to say.
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    Originally posted by Radar(Baba)O'Riley
    phoebe-

    Excellent piece! Quiet and powerful and emotional.

    Reminds me, of course, of the theme song to M*A*S*H called "Suicide is Painless". One of the verses is:

    The game of Life is hard to play.
    Gonna lose it anyway.
    The losing card I'll someday lay.
    So this is all I have to say.

    thank you so much :)
    The greatness of a nation and its moral progress can be judged by the way its animals are treated.
    -Mahatma Gandhi
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    that was really good Phoebe

    this verse is beautiful!

    Screaming into the thunder
    The thunder in my heart is louder
    But no one hears it... no one knows
    No one knows the hurt inside.
    Some people have to have the sultry evenings Cocktails in the blue, red and grey But I like every minute of the day.
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