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  • ShynerShyner Posts: 544
    edited September 8
    Gone away
    Words just play
    A game equates
    Still it means
    Everything
    It's all i do
    Everyday
    Words for who
    Words for me
    Words for you
    I'm melting
    Into the floor
    I can't take
    Anymore
    As i suppress
    I must confess
    I love you more
    When you draw
    Your sword
    Cause i feel
    And freedom becomes
    A painting

    Don't even know the meaning of 2 words i used here. This poem sucks
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  • ShynerShyner Posts: 544
    edited September 11
    Mr backspacer is all shook up again. 
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  • ShynerShyner Posts: 544
    Mix - Foo Fighters - Home - Echoes, Silence, Patience and Grace:
  • evsgjammevsgjamm Posts: 1,745
    8 Years Old

    Think of the child you once were
    You're 8 years old in a sunny room
    It's simple, it's real, it's alive, you're in bloom

    Think of the smile in your 8 year old mind
    Happy-go-lucky, all the damn time
    Come what may under the sunshine

    I'm happy I'm here I'm playing without fear
    Without fear of falling or crashing
    Without fear I am drawing and splashing

    Come over and play oh 8 year old self
    I miss you I need you I love you 'n what else
    Found the day when I was in that room
    The sunshine, my smile, the flowers in bloom




    Vancouver '03, Paramount Theatre '05, Saskatoon '05, Calgary '05, Edmonton '05, Saskatoon '11, Calgary '11, Calgary '13

    2010 WATCH IT GO TO FIRE!!
  • vogonpoetbythelakevogonpoetbythelake Posts: 1,792
    edited September 17
    What a beautiful poem and state of being to wake up with...thank you!
  • evsgjammevsgjamm Posts: 1,745
    Thank you vogonpoetbythelake.
    Vancouver '03, Paramount Theatre '05, Saskatoon '05, Calgary '05, Edmonton '05, Saskatoon '11, Calgary '11, Calgary '13

    2010 WATCH IT GO TO FIRE!!
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