You were loved

JWPearl

you were once loved
you were once cherished
you were once adored
you were once dear
you were once loyal
you were once knotted
but winds have changed
causing the waters
to crash into your
rocky foundations
slowly eroding your
very foundations
and your core started
to weaken and rot
and the castle itself
stands on dirty sand
allowing the weeds
to settle in and be thy
oxygen in your breath
that is why i left you
and you were no longer
loved
you were no longer
cherished
you were no longer
adored
you were no longer
dear
you were no longer
loyal
you were no longer
knotted
but memories haunt
the compassionate
that pity you to a very
sad lost loved one
that has to sail far
away to a forgotten land...

whispering hands

Haunting.. And moving!

donnaruhl

Good Job Tree. Trying to type with one finger here. I've felt the same way before. Only you put it a bit more subtle than I would have.<3

JWPearl

thank you..

whispering hands

donnaruhl said:

Good Job Tree. Trying to type with one finger here. I've felt the same way before. Only you put it a bit more subtle than I would have.<3</p>

This was JWPearl's poem.