you are thanked a tear fell on out

chadwick

pearls
kinda like slow beams dancing from mornings into evenings all the time
she's so kind in here
must be a star green or blue nightsky
her eyes this song goes like (this)

how wonderful jewels appear next to me
i haven't a clue
she just does (bring warmth against me)
as today wrote for tonight
last night for this morning
being all of her entire calendars
each & every day feels this way inside

so i cry a tear or two
when piano
gets what feels like this
soft so simple
not any longer empty

let's just be in dark quiet awhile

hedonist

Dark quiet...and light.

You remind me in ways of my husband, chadwick - kicking ass despite loss and other harshities of life...common sense with passion...getting through health issues too damn young to experience.

And the best - introspection and its expression, as with this writing of yours.

All leads to character. Backbone? Not sure of the proper term.

Sorry for the wordiness. Essentially wanted to say I liked this very much. Smiled as I took it in.

chadwick

hey thanks, hedonist. your response is very nice & got me thinking about things. anyhow you & your husband be well & take care. thank you again

justam

I like the mood of this one.

electronblue

makes me want to cry
but I love it!

Godfather.

have you ever heard of a band called "honey" ? these words sound like thier music, awesome !

Godfather.

chadwick

i've never heard of honey. lemme take a guess here, are they a 1970's group? maybe they can be found on the youtube?

Godfather.

hahah nooo, there a nu band with a colletive soul sound but yes they are on you tube, one of the members father was the manager for guns and roses and is currently managing some big acts and a few hot up and comers but anyway Honey is a good band.

Godfather.