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13,000 Poems

rollingsrollings unknown Posts: 7,124
edited January 2012 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
13,000 Poems
do you feel this the emptiness
I can hear it echo
I can hear a distant water drip and echoing
in a place once filled entirely with color and fiber living
love and laughter, sparks and creativity, warmth, and that stream of connections
so warm
how can this be now
so dark damp
and just out
how can this be the now
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    justamjustam Posts: 21,394
    Sometimes emptiness is just the space we need to feel so there's room to create something tomorrow or next week. If one's life is too crowded, there's less room to throw thoughts out on the lake.
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    Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    and sometimes it's a new space in time waiting to be filled
    with colors,sunshine and warmth.
    xlnt words Rollings I really like it !

    Godfather.
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    rollingsrollings unknown Posts: 7,124
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    hedonisthedonist standing on the edge of forever Posts: 24,524
    edited April 2016
    Goddammit, rollings.

    Was reading this and feeling all warm and happy.

    Then the last post? Excellent in your usual way.

    (I'm curious what Series #1 - 36 entail)

    *edited, as I can clearly see the entailing part of #37.
    Post edited by hedonist on
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